no time ago
or else a life
walking in the dark
i met christ
jesus)my heart
flopped over
and lay still
while he passed(as
close as i’m to you
yes closer
made of nothing
except loneliness
(E.E. Cummings)
no time ago
or else a life
walking in the dark
i met christ
jesus)my heart
flopped over
and lay still
while he passed(as
close as i’m to you
yes closer
made of nothing
except loneliness
(E.E. Cummings)
April 2, 2007 at 5:39 pm
I love that Kristine! And I also love that you didn’t write Cummings’ name in lower case. This is a poem I have never seen before. Thank you.
April 2, 2007 at 5:53 pm
Thanks Kristine. And just in case anyone is wondering about E.E. Cummings and the issue of capitalization raised by MCQ, check this out:
http://www.gvsu.edu/english/cummings/caps.htm
April 2, 2007 at 6:02 pm
That whole capitalization thing was interesting; I learned something from that.
(Nice installment in your series, Kristine.)
April 2, 2007 at 6:21 pm
Kevin,
All I have to do is provide about 1,000 more moments of learning for you and we will almost be equal!
April 2, 2007 at 6:38 pm
Thank you Kristine, Cummings is one of my favourite poets.
April 2, 2007 at 10:07 pm
I haven’t ever read this cummings poem. Thanks!
April 2, 2007 at 11:18 pm
Thanks, Kristine. That poem is new to me as well (and we can never have too many poems on the Bloggernacle).
April 3, 2007 at 6:25 am
Great. I have a (smarmy Christian) student doing his extended essay on Christian poetry of the twentieth century. I printed this off and dropped it in his lap. He looked confused, reread it, looked at me … I just smiled. God bless poetry.
April 25, 2007 at 12:32 pm
OK I HAVE A QUESTION…
WHAT THE HECK IS THIS POEM TALKING BOUT? IVE BEEN TRYING TO ANALYZE THIS FOR TH ELONGEST TIME….HELPPPPP I DONT UNDERSTAND. IS THER A MEANING FOR THE )OR THE (?
April 25, 2007 at 3:12 pm
johnson, I don’t think I’d try to parse any meaning into the parentheses–Cummings liked to play with punctuation. This particular poem could probably be written out as a single long sentence, and interpretable in a fairly straightforward way…
June 5, 2007 at 3:45 pm
This will, perhaps unfortunately (perhaps not =p ) be my only post, but I just want to respond to Johnson and Kristine by saying that I think the parentheses are definitely meaningful… think of what a parenthetical expression is — think of how we use parentheses and what they mean syntactically. In inverting them, then, cummings makes an implicit valuation of the experience described in the poem…